mp54321's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Open Your Eyes (EoE) Hardstyle]

Good, but here's some pointers.

I liked the melody and bass a lot. I think the kicks at the beginning need to be remastered, and the kicks throughout the song need to be louder (I could barely hear them). Anyway, you have a great base for an awesome song! Keep it up!

FrameWork responds:

Thanks for the review, to be honest, I didn't make the begining kick, as I'm stil experimenting trying to get that right sound. But, I'm pretty sure it's meant to be patterned with a bassline, not solo. :D I'm gunna make my own next time XD

[Just Hold On (JMS Remix)]

TOTALLY WICKED!

I loved this song! Totally deadmau5 sounding! How'd the heck did you make the lead?! I want to know because I've been working a long time trying to get that lead! Let me know if you can, will ya?

djt93901 responds:

Hey thank you from the review! Look in your pm.

Thanks,

Jaymuhsin

[U Tell M3 cause IDK]

Needs a Bassline.

That's what's missing. The bassline that gives a song like this flow is missing entirely. You have the build-ups and the good synth but no bassline. Therefore, the song falls.

Ninjamurai responds:

Don't be such a downer. :) I know it has virtually no baseline, but hey, who knows, I might just finally get the full program and revamp all my songs. <(^_^)>

[->>Just The Way You Are<<-]

Amazing.

I showed this song to my girlfriend and she had tears of joy. Good work.

vwvSTATICvwv responds:

Lol, thanks man xD

[Moonlight Shadow - Champ Rmx]

Well remixed.

This was a great remix of Moonlight Shadow. I like the song, and this made the song that much better. I can never seem to get the lyrics out to make a RMX so if you can send me advice on how to do so, that would be much appreciated. Good work!

Champius responds:

thanks for the review.....not sure what you mean by get the lyrics out....so i dunno, if you wanted you could pm me your question more in depth and id be glad to help....sorry : (

[Ice Cream!]

Good, but here's some advice.

I thought that the melody and alternative melody was well thought out and the bassline fit well. However, I thought the song could use a little more power. It seems that in the intro that there was a lot of "empty space" that could have been filled with a pad or other softer sound effect. Also, the sound could be boosted a little to make it a little harder, but that is a personal preference. 9/10 for being strong, and just needing a few minor changes.

digitaldamage responds:

Thanks for your review. I'll EQ it some more to give it more power, fix that awful 2nd lead, and put some midrange instruments in.